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Offline Lynx

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*new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« on: October 02, 2013, 14:27:40 »
Here they are: the first pages of part five: THE FAR SOUTH
If you want to read part 4 first, you can click on the link here
Are you new to this comic? Click on the links for part 1, part 2 and part 3 down in my signature

GET READY FOR SOME ACTION!

Enjoy!
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Offline Lynx

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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2013, 14:29:41 »
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2013, 14:31:28 »
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2013, 15:36:02 »
trouble seems to find them where ever they go, how will they get out of this?  ???

Great set up for the pictures!  :)
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #4 on: October 02, 2013, 18:45:31 »
You are a great story teller and the lighting of your scènes is wonderful  :love: :love:

Karim
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2013, 18:47:02 »
Great continuation! Really liking the use of the circular movement stripes, adds great additional depth to the action
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #6 on: October 03, 2013, 14:41:37 »
To be continued?! In a such a cliffhanger!? AGH. I want more now. Uhm. Pretty please?

Great pics, as always. I think it's amazing how you can really get them to move! :)

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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2013, 11:56:04 »
Hi Lynx! I finally got around to reading the entire story so far.

 :wow:  :wow: Congratulations on this awesome comic!  :wow: :wow:

You've managed to create a lot of tension right from the start and I'm still very curious to find out what really happened with Randolph in the beginning. Everywhere all these great-looking characters keep popping up, I love it  ;D
You've used the 'special' facial expressions really well I think: the slightly confused and somewhat silly expression of Randolph always works, and then there's Lizzy's face... Briljant use of that alien! I never used to like those weird looking demon clickies, shows how much I know  :)

I've had a lot of laughs while reading and you make it funny in a subtle way sometimes too. That white lord is hilarious, and you yet can almost feel for him too in a way, because he has this history of being made fun of. The others aren't black-and-white either. I really like that in a comic.

The photography is very good too. Do you make storyboards or something before you start shooting?
And I like the little effects of movement and noise. They seem just right!

The only sad thing is that I now have to wait for the rest, like everyone else   ;)



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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #8 on: October 06, 2013, 16:39:32 »
I love this part of your story. :love: You have done some very nice pictures here with great scenes!!! Congrats!!

George. :)
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Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
« Reply #9 on: October 08, 2013, 10:13:41 »
Thanks for your nice comments, my friends.. As I told you before, that really means a lot to me!

@Rhalius: Randolph didn't end up there by accident... you'll see!
@Playmovictorian: I only take pics at daylight, this scene turned out pretty well (not because of my skills as photographer which are pretty limited ;)
@Tiermann: I did those circular movements before (p.e. in part 2) but with bigger pics the depth effect is much better.. I didn't notice that.. Thanks!
@tahra: Yes, that is mean isn't it? I do that because I want my beloved readers keep attached...(is this correct English?)
Don't worry, I've been busy with the next pages a lot last week...
@Birdie: A new reader! I'm glad to have you on board Birdie, especially because of your nice comment (as always). Randolph's expression works out well indeed, I wasn't aware of that when I started the comic but coincidentally it turns out exactly the way you describe it. The face of Lizzy is something different, when I change the camera angle (en profile, from below it looks like he is smiling and en face he's more serious) The blue eyed ghost pirates have the most expression in my opinion. I don't make storyboards, they're all in my head... ::) Only for dialogues or to sort out pictures I sometimes use pen and paper. I do it all on intuition, after reading tons of comics in my life (lots of them from Belgium!) I just know how it should look like.
@Georgeag1972: Thanks, there's more coming up!
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