Awesome 
Poor woman trying to get the conversation going
It's great how you incorporate the extra's in your story. Their comments add even more life to the plot.
And your camera angles are very interesting!
Now I'm curious about Broderick's village. Will there be one in the story?
Only one problem: how about a moat? Or did they have the drawbridge without moats too?
(anyway it's a silly detail, this story is fabulous
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