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Offline PlaymoZoo

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My first story: 'the forest'
« on: October 13, 2012, 17:37:46 »
So, I've never actually made a playmobil story, especially not in English!
But, when I made a rainforest diorama I just had inspiration... You will see some faults, like magically appearing objects and conifers in the rainforest and the spelling won't be flawless, but I enjoy doing this. Okay, here we go!



‘So whát were you doing here, again?’
Ray Higmont sighed. Dimitri, his driver, asked him this for the fourth time.
‘I’m an archaeologist, remember? I’ve read about this old treasure, from the old indians that lived here, that’s somewhere in the rainforest over here and-’ ‘maybe,’ Dimitri interrupted him ‘maybe it’s somewhere over here, yep. And maybe these indians are still here,’ he nodded his head. ‘and maybe unicorns exist. I’m telling you boy, we should turn around so you can go to your rich, western house and read about the treasure. You don’t stand a chance here in the wild!’



‘All right, all right, Dimitri, I know it is dangerous. But I can take care of myself. And I get a guide, right? In a week I’ll be heading home with or without that treasure.’
Dimitri still wasn’t convinced, but at least he stopped talking.

‘kay, kay, boy,’ Dimitri said after a long drive, ‘we’re where you want to be. The road ends here. ’
‘Thank you, Dim.’ Ray got out of the car, stretched his legs and took his stuff out of the car.
‘How much do I own you?’ he asked. ‘Nothing, it’s alright, boy.’
Dimitri mumbled something that sounded like ‘I don’t take money from the death.’
Ray shook his head. He must have misheard it.
 



TO BE CONTINUED... (hope you like it)

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2012, 17:43:25 »
Wow, great start to this story! The pics are fantastic! :clap:
Looking forward to more!! :)9
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2012, 17:48:56 »
Can't wait to hear more!
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2012, 18:28:25 »
Part 2:

Ray was curious who his guide would be. They said he was the best of the best, that he knew the forest like the monkeys did. How would he look? Ray imagined a bear of a guy with a good tan.
‘So you must be Ray, right?’ he heard behind him. Quickly he turned around and saw his guide.
Well, at least he was right about the tan…



‘Rachel Baghari, your guide,’ The girl said. ‘but you can call me Rache.’
Ray was too amazed to say anything. ‘You expected another guide, didn’t you, westerner?’ she said, and she was absolutely right. ‘uhh.. no, I didn’t, ehhr.. no.’
‘Well, you’re not good at lying, westerner,’ she laughed, ‘shall we start over, then?’
‘Yes, probably.’
‘Hi, I’m Rachel, your guide.’ ‘Hello, I’m Ray, the person you to guide.’ 



‘So, what do you want to do?’ Rachel asked ‘I suppose you are not here for a holiday tour, are you?’
‘No, I’m here for a treasure of-’ ‘oh, you’re one of these treasure hunters looking for something old and valuable, aren’t you?’ Rachel immediately asked him. 
‘In a short way, yes, I am.’ Ray said.
‘This place isn’t for wimps, you know. I mean, look around: there will be no hotels, houses… Or hospitals’
Ray got tired of all the “you can’t do this”- talk, but he still looked around for the first time. She was right, again. This place wasn’t for wimps.



Good thing I'm no wimp, Ray thought.


to be continued :)
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 19:33:40 »
Part 3

‘Hey, Ray, it’s getting dark. We should get in the tent.’ She pointed at a small yellow tent between the trees. Just one tent? Ray thought. ‘Yes, I know. It’s just one tent,’ Rachel said, like she could read his thoughts, ‘can you handle that, westerner? Not afraid of sleeping in the same tent?’
How does she do that, knowing everything I feared for?! Is it that obvious? Ray asked himself.
‘Anyway, you’ll have to be happy we have a tent for tonight,’ she said, ‘the coming nights we won’t have a tent; that would be way too heavy to take along in the jungle.’

And so the night came…



The next day:
Ray just packed his stuff when Rachel said: ‘you can’t take all of that, westerner!’ she looked like he was trying to snuggle a dodo into the jungle. ‘What?’ Ray asked, surprised.
‘How do you want to take that all along in the jungle? That would be insane!’ she said and pointed at my two bags filled with food, rope, books and other needs. ‘you’ll have to leave the most, Ray.’



Rachel said he had to leave his stuff in the tent and cover the whole tent in leaves and branches to make sure the monkeys wouldn’t  steal anything.


He wasn’t happy with it, but he understood taking everything along was impossible.
‘so where do you want to find that treasure of you?’ Rachel asked. Ray looked at his map and thought of all the books he read about this jungle. ‘I think we should go to the North for about 700 meters,’ he said and looked again to be sure, ‘yeah, to the North.’



to be continued...

(story telling is really fun! Thank you for the reactions, Playmoman and Bonniebeth!)
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #5 on: October 13, 2012, 21:22:36 »
Yes it is fun, and you are doing it very well. Is that a rug or towel for the forest floor? It looks great

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #6 on: October 13, 2012, 21:28:29 »
Yes it is fun, and you are doing it very well. Is that a rug or towel for the forest floor? It looks great

Thank you, it's a towel :-[
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #7 on: October 13, 2012, 21:44:13 »
So, they walked to the North. It was really hot and Ray regretted wearing his brown jacked. He looked longingly at the short sleeves of Rachel, who was jumping and hopping over stumps like a deer. He, as a matter of fact, was stumbling and falling over the stumps like a penguin. 700 meter were way longer than he thought.



‘Can we stop for a minute, Rachel?’ he gasped. ‘what?’ she turned around, ‘already, westerner?’
‘yes, already, “guide”’ Ray was getting really tired of the whole “poor-weak-westerner”- thing.
‘I’m just not used to this heat, alright?’ he snarled. ‘Than sit down, westerner. I never said you couldn’t.’ Sulking he sat down after checking the ground. It felt like Rachel won, and he didn’t like that, but he was glad he could rest anyway.



You can say a lot about the westerner, but he has guts, Rachel thought while looking at the grumpy guy sitting on the moist ground. No good condition, but guts. Suddenly she spotted something orange in the tree above him. What…



‘Ray. Don’t stand up.’ She said quickly. ‘I wasn’t going to, Ráche. That the thing with sitting down, you know.’ ‘No, no. I’m serious! There is eh.. Whatever you do, don’t stand up. Promise?’ he looked like he sensed something was wrong.
‘Rachel, what is going on..? I won’t stand up, I promise.’
‘Alright, there is a huge poisonous snake hissing above your head.’

‘WHÁÁÁT?!’ he yelled. He didn’t stand up, like he promised, instead he just jumped straight down. Ray, you fool! She thought. The snake got scared of the sudden movement and fell from the tree.



‘Holy, holy, holy no!’ he squealed while landing on his back, ‘is it gone?’
‘Uhm..’ the snake fell on Ray’s belly and looked amazed by the rapid change. 
WhatdoIdowhatdoIdo? Rachel asked herself.

to be (guess what!) continued :wave:
« Last Edit: October 15, 2012, 17:36:07 by Wolf Knight »
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2012, 22:39:49 »
 :o Oh dear! A snake? I can't take this suspense... :lol:
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2012, 23:48:53 »
Really great so far! More please!
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