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Offline Pynedor

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #20 on: October 14, 2012, 18:01:32 »
Ah, yet more suspense! :lol:
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #21 on: October 14, 2012, 18:05:08 »
Ah, yet more suspense! :lol:

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To add some more: find the alligator....  :P
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #22 on: October 14, 2012, 18:11:18 »
:lol:
To add some more: find the alligator....  :P

I didn't even notice him before. I wish Ray some more luck crossing then. At least he has Rachel to save him though. :lol:
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #23 on: October 14, 2012, 20:19:44 »
At least he has Rachel to save him though. :lol:

Yup, if Rachel wasn't accompanying Ray on his journey to find the treasure, I wouldn't expect him to make it very far through the forest. :lol:

Btw, that river looks really cool, what did you make it out of? :)
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #24 on: October 15, 2012, 10:06:31 »
Poor Ray... thinking he is Indiana Jones.. I blame television, children tend to play with their clickies what they see in movies or in cartoons. It might give clickies delusions of grandure.  :lol:

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #25 on: October 15, 2012, 14:49:41 »

-PART 6-

‘There we go!’ he said and jumped from the tree…



For a moment he felt like he was flying. I should yell like Tarzan, went through his head for some reason. But the tree on the other side was getting very close. He had to let go and grab one of the branches, or he would get stuck in the middle of the river. Oh no, help me, he thought and he let go. His fingers were trying to grab anything they could find. Funny enough, they weren’t the first parts to find support; his feet were. They landed on the roots of a big mangrove tree. He felt he was tilting backwards towards the river. Luckily  he could hold on to the branches above his head and Ray slowly stood straight up.



He looked at Rachel, who was looking at him like he just turned into a flying monkey.
Ok, be cool, Ray, he thought, be cool…
‘your turn now, Rache.’ He said. 



‘Ray, I’ve done things in this forest, like stealing back my purse from monkey’s and climbing in trees to find out there is a giant spider sitting in front of me, but I’ve never, éver swung over a fast streaming river filled with  alligators and leeches using only a vain!’
Oh my, are there alligators and leeches there?! Went through his head.
‘Uhh.. well, you should try it. It’s great fun!’ he said, failing on trying to be funny.

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #26 on: October 15, 2012, 15:03:16 »
Excellent! You're doing a great job! The tukan and the frog aren't afraid at all... ;)
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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #27 on: October 15, 2012, 15:08:36 »
Btw, that river looks really cool, what did you make it out of? :)

Well, I'm just trying everything. It's all    improvisation!
It's a jacked folted up like a river, with pieces of plastic over it :lol:

Excellent! You're doing a great job! The tukan and the frog aren't afraid at all... ;)

Glad you like it :)

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #28 on: October 15, 2012, 17:38:10 »
This is a really great photostory so far!! Action packed and with great turn of events!! I am really looking forward to the rest of the story! Its been some time since we had some good adventure photostory!! Keep up the good work!!!  :)9

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Re: My first story: 'the forest'
« Reply #29 on: October 15, 2012, 17:51:27 »
This is a really great photostory so far!! Action packed and with great turn of events!! I am really looking forward to the rest of the story! Its been some time since we had some good adventure photostory!! Keep up the good work!!!  :)9

Thank you for this  ;)
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