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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: guy23 on August 27, 2010, 12:59:26

Title: vilent crimanels.
Post by: guy23 on August 27, 2010, 12:59:26

my first story :confetti: :woohoo:, hope you like it :munch: :crossed:


One fine day john was out on his bike,
(http://001.jpg)
He came across some dodgy looking men.
(http://002.jpg)
They injured him and knocked him off his bike.
(http://003.jpg)
No time to lose,
(http://004.jpg)
and they ran,
(http://005.jpg)
ran straight into the police.
(http://006.jpg)
now they are finally under arrest.
(http://007.jpg)
They are finally in prison.
(http://008.jpg)
THE END :clap: :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: vilent crimanels.
Post by: WarriorOfToys on August 27, 2010, 13:02:04

Sounds like a great story Guy...
But I cant see the pictures! :'(
Hopefully it will be working later, and I can give you better compliments. :-\

Title: Re: vilent crimanels.
Post by: guy23 on August 27, 2010, 13:04:16

i'm having problems....bear with me...

Title: Re: vilent crimanels.
Post by: Mina on August 27, 2010, 13:23:03

ahhhh I finally see the pictures... good story :)

Title: Re: vilent crimanels.
Post by: guy23 on August 27, 2010, 13:44:13

this is the bad one :-[
there is a better and new one, out now :munch: :woohoo: :munch:

Title: Re: vilent crimanels.
Post by: Sylvia on August 27, 2010, 15:49:45

http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=5464.0