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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: WarriorOfToys on July 13, 2010, 01:34:24
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I wanted to tell you the tale of my Klickies.
So here it is, How my Kingdom grew and expanded.
The wars that were fought, the treaties they made,
From my Klickies point of view.
The first Knights were always fighting for cotrol of the castle.
They warred with each other over the walls,
And possession of the castle changed hands many times.
Only Nature Master was able to unite them and bring a long reign of peace.
But men plotted against him and overthrew him.
He died and his son fought for the peace, finally managing to overthrow the evil knights.
His peace was short lived however,
A new super power called the Roman Empire invaded the small island which supported the Kingdom and quwickly overthrew it with their numerical superiority.
They ruled the Kindom for many years,
And even won many victories against the invading Knights from the mainland.
But their overall stay on the island was unwelcomed,
And they were forced off it by a small cohilition of Knights.
The Romans were persistent in their attempts to retake the island but eventually left.
The Knights formed into two dynasties
And rule of the Kingdom changed between them
Dependent on the strength of either dynasty.
However, the dynasties were destroyed in a short civil war
And the Kingdom emerged as a republic.
The Kingdom grew and Knights flocked there to become part of the growing power they called the Holy Order of Knights. Two other Kingdoms sprang up during this time.
The Western Kingdom, a rich military order (much like the Spartans of Greece).
And the Northern Kingdom,
Whose Viking roots make them fierce, but also distrusting and hungry for power.
The Western Kingdom flourished and strengthened,
But the Northen Kingdom crumbled,
After the death of their first King the country fell into civil war.
Meanwhile the Holy Order of Knights grew more and more powerful,
The country grew richer and the citizens lived happily.
But the core was rotting, the once civilized republic became a front for the dirty exchanges that happened behind closed doors.
Aun Kerac saw how the republic was decaying and tried to change it for the better,
But the other Knights were too greedy and corrupt to listen.
He was thrown from the courts and the Kingdom.
However, Aun Kerac was not going to allow the Kingdom to betray their people.
He fled to the warring Northen Kingdom where he easily built together a small army and claimed some land.
He created his own principality and built his power, even allying with the Western Kingdom.
Together they march against the Holy Order of Knights.
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That is as far as my story has gotten. so far Aun Kerac is facing of against the order in a battle, but the battle is precariously swaying in the Orders favor.
His chances are stacked against him, as he is outnumbered 2 to 1.
Hope you all enjoyed. :wave:
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This is a very epic sounding story, WoT!
Is there more to come? Part of something bigger?
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A great epic Warrior!!! more to come I hope!!!!
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Such a captivating and beautifully told epic story :love:
I had so many pictures of your Klickies coming to my mind !
This reminds me of the medieval "book of hours" decorated with epic pictures !
Karim :)
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It's all been said by the others - it's an unusual and effective approach to a Playmobil story.
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Glad you guys all like it, and yes, there is more to come... ;)
Its the story I have been working on ever since I can remember...
Since when I first got Playmobil.
It is not a story that most of you see on this board...
It is the story of how I have played with my Playmobil.
Lets see if I can make this clearer... ???
In a way, it's not made up.
Ever since I was little, putting something into a storyline was so much fun for me.
In first grade I even wrote a few small books! (Which my teachers loved and encouraged!)
When I got Playmobil I always had to add them to my collection somehow,
I had to make a story that would blend them in.
The way I played was by creating a story for my Klickies to fit into.
So since from when I can remember,
This is the story that I have created through playing with my Playmobil...
Making any sense?
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Making any sense?
Very!!! An dnow I can understand why you constructed all this organisational proposal for the medieval theme!! I guess not all children give simple and plain meanings to their toys!
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That's a very intricate and interesting story WarriorOfToys! :)
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As they say my Friend "make your dreams come true" :love:
Karim :)
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As they say my Friend "make your dreams come true" :love:
Karim :)
Are you suggesting I lead a large force of Knights against the modern world
and destroy all tecnology so we are left to live in a Medieval like world? :o :o :o
:lol: No, I would want to keep PlaymoFriends running. :)
But you have sparked a light in me Karim... Keep a close eye on your new updates... >:D
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Very!!! An dnow I can understand why you constructed all this organisational proposal for the medieval theme!! I guess not all children give simple and plain meanings to their toys!
Yes, the construction of the Medieval theme that way would have been lovely as a child! :love:
I could never not put a story to something,
That is why I am hoping to become a writer. :)
That's a very intricate and interesting story WarriorOfToys! :)
Thanks Justindo! :)
I loved the story and I love expanding on it.
There are ofcourse some... Glitchy parts to it... ::)
Like unexpected EBay buys.
There story was going to go in a much different direction untill I bought a large EBay buy!
And it all changed.
So I just scribbled out in my mind the part of the story I was working on and changed it.
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Very nice WoT ........ ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)
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Thanks Giorginetto! :)
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Excellent work WoT, it really makes it all so much clearer for me. I really hope I can sway my children to play with their playmo like this because I really think this is the best way.
The story it self is also very intriguing and I can't wait for the continuation of it.
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Thanks Gis! ;D
Here is a bit more... :)
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After his flight to the North, Aun Kerac returns to the East Kingdom.
He has allied with the Western Emperor and some mainland Knights.
Together their forces march against the Holy Order of Knights, though they are outnumbered nearly 2 to 1.
Aun Kerac races through the countryside,
Pillaging some of the larger towns and causing havoc throughout the Kingdom.
When word reaches him that the Holy Order has emptied their garrison and are amrching West he immediately heads East to confront them.
Stopping only a few miles from the capitol he chooses to deploy his troops next to a short cliff face.
He positions the Knights from the mainland at the bottom of the cliff, off to his right.
There the valley heads off in the direction of the Holy Order's front lines.
He positions the rest of his infantry at the top of the cliff, where most of the Holy Order will be stationed.
As for the cavalry, he positions them behind the mainland Knights.
The Western Emperor stations his men to the left of Aun Kerac's, on top of the cliff.
His cavalry form the far left wing of the army.
The Holy Order arrives the next day and stations their men.
The bulk of the army they place on the cliff face, but they leave a few men to guard the valley.
As the battle commences Aun Kerac moves his men forward to block a small path leading to the valley,
About halfway along the cliff face. The mainland Knights and Western Emperor follow suit,
The mainland Knights a little further ahead of the front line, but protected by the cliff face.
There they wait for the Holy Order to make their moves.
The Holy Order first starts by moving nearly half of the men into the canyon, and marching them through like a can or sardines.
The mainland Knights are no match for such a large force, but Aun Kerac has prepared for this.
He brings his archers forward and when the Holy Order is within reach, they unleash a deadly volley of arrows.
The Holy orders troops are cut to pieces by the archers in their compact stance.
They quickly return fire, but it has little effect.
The mainland Knights charge and engage in a bloody melee with the men left in the canyon.
Meanwhile, the rest of the Holy Order just waits to see what will be the out come of the canyon battle.
Aun Kerac realizes his freedom of movement and quickly sends his spear men down to the canyon floor through the path to aid the mainland Knights.
The Knights morale deteriorates quickly, and soon they break and flee. Aun Kerac's men persue them,
While Aun Kerac himself leads the cavalry through the valley.
The Holy order seems to finally realize that the battle for the valley has turned against them and they begin to move.
They deploy more men to the valley to try to stop the assault, while they send another group to the path to attempt to flank them.
The Western Emperor quickly and decisively moves his men to confront the flanking group.
But at the sight of the well armored and well disciplined Western Military force approaching,
The flanking force halts.
The valley becomes a river of blood as the men below fight for control of the vital road.
The cavalry, lead by Aun kerac, charge the dense mass of men. Their charge is so powerful it can be heard by the men on the cliffs top.
The smash the Holy Orders lines, flinging men into the air with their heavy ash spears.
Their charge breaks the Holy Order's lines and sends them running for the hills.
The cavalry hunt them down and slay them while the infantry marches to flank the Holy Order's front lines.
When the infantry emerges from the valley the Western Empire attacks the would be flanking force sent by the Holy order.
Aun Kerac's infantry join the fray from the rear and the whole group is either slain or captured.
The rest of the Holy Order see the hopelessness of the situation, and in a final attempt to destroy the "rebels" they charge the mass of men.
The few cavalry that the Holy order has charges into the clump of Aun Kerac and the Western Emperor's men,
Closely followed by their infantry. There is confusion of who is who, and many of the Knights actually charge their own men!
There are shouts of treason and the Holy Order turns on themselves, attacking each other.
Man against man, brother against brother the Holy Order falls into panic and mass routing.
The Emperor's Cavalry combined with the returning Cavalry under Aun Kerac attack the flanks of the Order's infantry and finally break them completely.
Every man in the fray in captured, and later many are executed for their crimes.
The virtually undiminished army of Aun Kerac's marches to the capitol city and lays siege to it.
But with only the few men that had escaped the bloodshed there to protect it,
The castle is virtually not garrisoned and they surrender immediately.
The shock of the battle (later called the Battle of Turin Valley) spread through the Kingdom.
And even more shocking perhaps, was the capture of the capitol city.
Immediate effects went throughout the Kingdom. Any stolen land was returned, new lords loyal to Aun Kerac were placed in power.
The old Lords who had supported and profited greatly from the land grab were stripped of their titles, or executed.
Those who had attempted to stop the taking of the lands were given titles and status, and good standing in court.
A welcomed peace spread throughout the Kingdom, and the Western and Eastern Kingdoms alliance strengthened.
It would be many years before war fell upon the two Kingdoms again,
And it would rise in the North though the conclusion of their Civil War.
But that is for another time. ;)
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A great ending! (For now). Almost like a movie or something. Great batlle climax at the end.
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Great story indeed. Can't wait for the actually klicky photo story to go with it *wink*
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A great ending! (For now). Almost like a movie or something. Great battle climax at the end.
Thanks Ali Baba! Like a movie eh? :)
I really like the battle as it is also a historically accurate battle too!
There were many battles back then that went along like this...
Ever heard the song of Roland? The whole story was a fight for the valley/canyon.
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Great story indeed. Can't wait for the actually klicky photo story to go with it *wink*
Wellll, I dont know if there will be a photo story for it...
Maybe a few parts here and there...
Like I am going to post Aun Kerac's coronation soon. (It has a lot of pics for you guys... ;) ;D )
Maybe pics of the battle..... If I can find some time. :)
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Here it is, the coronation of Aun Kerac.
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(http://a.imageshack.us/img717/4668/232gr.jpg)
Templar: Are you ready to recieve the Oath?
Aun Kerac: I am.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img713/5773/233v.jpg)
Do you accept your responsibility to your people, to your country, to your allies?
Do you accept your lands, your title, and your power?
Do you accept the teachings of the Church, the works of God, and the road to Sainthood?
I do.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img713/5034/234qf.jpg)
Let this cape remind you you are of Noble birth.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img713/9468/235kl.jpg)
Let these cuffs remind you you are bound to your people.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img375/4396/236i.jpg)
(http://a.imageshack.us/img375/7735/237z.jpg)
Let this scepter remind you you are this country's sword.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img841/834/238bj.jpg)
(http://a.imageshack.us/img841/2324/239j.jpg)
And let this crown...
(http://a.imageshack.us/img841/3227/240g.jpg)
Remind you, you are KING!
(http://a.imageshack.us/img507/2639/242dh.jpg)
Now ready your armor.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img507/2740/243d.jpg)
Are you prepared to become protector?
I am.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img507/5524/244bb.jpg)
Lets these boots help crush your enemies,
(http://a.imageshack.us/img832/4531/245d.jpg)
Let this armor help you slay them,
(http://a.imageshack.us/img832/9663/246y.jpg)
And let this chain-mail defend you from them.
(http://a.imageshack.us/img832/8/247y.jpg)
I now proclaim you, KING, and PROTECTOR!
Crowds: VIVAT, VIVAT, VIVAT!!!
(http://a.imageshack.us/img251/5720/241ye.jpg)
And so a new era begins...
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/me grumbles!!
The words are great WoT, However unfortunately I am unable to see the pics at work...more comments later :-)
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Fantastic!!! I did not had the chance to read through all the history until now!! Very interesting hisotry indeed and the battle is brilliant!!!
As for the coronation!!! I have no words WoT!!! :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: Very well done!!!
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/me grumbles!!
The words are great WoT, However unfortunately I am unable to see the pics at work...more comments later :-)
Thanks Gis.
I tried to make the words as moving as possible, so the pictures are just additions.
But they look pretty good too! ;D (If I do say so myself... ;) )
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Fantastic!!! I did not had the chance to read through all the history until now!! Very interesting history indeed and the battle is brilliant!!!
As for the coronation!!! I have no words WoT!!! :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: Very well done!!!
Thanks Sir Wolf! ;D ;D ;D
Aun kerac is a brilliant commander, and his son Richard is proving himself to be one aswell. :)
It seems for now the lineage of Aun Kerac, and the survival of the Eastern Kingdom is in good hands.
The coronation I made to express the care that Aun kerac hopes to bring to the Kingdom.
He in a way wishes not only to be the ruler, but to follow the Lord (God) and be like a father.
In his hands the Kingdoms will prosper, and wield untold power.
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The pictures do add a lot. Great use of the tournament tent.
Really impressed with your work WoT, keep up the good work!
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The pictures do add a lot. Great use of the tournament tent.
Really impressed with your work WoT, keep up the good work!
Thanks Gis! ;D
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I agree with Gis and Panos! Excellent set of pics and story Wot! :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: Very well done! :clap: :clap: :clap:
B-W :wave:
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I agree with Gis and Panos! Excellent set of pics and story Wot! :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: Very well done! :clap: :clap: :clap:
B-W :wave:
Thanks BW. :)
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I love the story and the coronation, WarriorOfToys!
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I love the story and the coronation, WarriorOfToys!
Thanks Justindo, glad you did! :)
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very nice :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow:
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Very beautiful story and great pictures WOT :wave:
And I love your new avatar :love:
Karim :)
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Thank you very much Playmo1989 and Karim! :)