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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: Bill Blackhurst on November 25, 2008, 21:58:49
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Chief 1 to command E121.
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Go ahead Chief 1.
Command E121, go to channel 6.
Command E121, do you have a firefighter S____ M______ assigned on this fire scene?
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10-4 Chief 1, she is firefighter #1214, & she was assigned to the roof ventilation team.
Command E121, what is her present location?
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Chief 1, she has just gotten back to E121.…..Chief 1, we have a situation here, & it’s not good……..
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Friends of firefighter #1214 try to comfort her after she has found out that her fiance was the critically injured firefighter, but this tragic life changing event make the attempts useless.
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10-4, I’m on my way to your location. Keep her there. Chief 1 to unit #1181 command.
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Go ahead Chief 1.
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Disconnect your vehicle from trailer ST11A, & leave it in stationary positioning. Then meet me at E121’s location ASAP.
10-4 Chief 1.
Chief 1 to headquarters.
Go ahead Chief 1.
Dispatch car 129 from station 1 with personnel to Playmobil City Hospital Emergency Department code 3, & have them call me on my cell phone when they’re enroute for instructions.
10-4 Chief 1.
Chief 1 to Headquarters, Assistant Chief 1, & all units.
Go ahead Chief 1.
By my authority, Assistant Chief 1 is to assume command of this fire scene until further notice. Headquarters, make sure all units hear this transfer of authority, & who they are to answer to presently.
10-4 Chief 1.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Hello Bill,
As allways this installment is first rate. Again the sense of communication was captured really well, but there were other aspects going on. I really like how the fire fighters turn up after finishing their tasks only to be confronted with the bad news. I liked the way you captured the moment when the fire fighters girlfriend is told the terrible news, the way she is looking away slightly gives me the impression of disbelief and sadness. I cant wait for the final installment although i have the impression the outcome will not be a good one ;D. I wait in anticipation to see how you tackle the very final chapter to this story, i have often wondered how i would do this myself :-\
Tim :wave:
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Hello Bill,
As allways this installment is first rate. Again the sense of communication was captured really well, but there were other aspects going on. I really like how the fire fighters turn up after finishing their tasks only to be confronted with the bad news. I liked the way you captured the moment when the fire fighters girlfriend is told the terrible news, the way she is looking away slightly gives me the impression of disbelief and sadness. I cant wait for the final installment although i have the impression the outcome will not be a good one ;D. I wait in anticipation to see how you tackle the very final chapter to this story, i have often wondered how i would do this myself :-\
Tim :wave:
You have captured my idea perfectly, Tim ;D! As I said earlier, these last 2 parts were difficult to put together due to the way things have progressed. I guess it's like in real movies where there are always calm before the storm effects, but you have to balance them carefully so it doesn't become too boring :-[! Keep watching, the finales are in process :lol:, & thank you for the positive feedback :)!
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Tim has said it all, Bill; there's nothing I can add.
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Tim has said it all, Bill; there's nothing I can add.
Thank you Gordon!
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This is so sad. :'( But beautifully done. I love the way you have the fiance with her friends so that they are always covering her face so that you can't see the smile. All the details in your scenes show you've done this a few times. Good job! :clap: :clap: :clap:
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This is so sad. :'( But beautifully done. I love the way you have the fiance with her friends so that they are always covering her face so that you can't see the smile. All the details in your scenes show you've done this a few times. Good job! :clap: :clap: :clap:
Thank you bb! I'm glad you were able to see my attempts to portray realism.
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Love the story. Great details waiting for part IV
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Love the story. Great details waiting for part IV
Thank you Clong! It was a very detailed project.
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Magnificent, in a sad way. :clap:
I like the way you did the sad emotional pictures by avoiding her face.
The klicky smile throws it off sometimes... :-\
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Magnificent, in a sad way. :clap:
I like the way you did the sad emotional pictures by avoiding her face.
The klicky smile throws it off sometimes... :-\
Thank very much for your supportive comments, WoT! I tried every thing I could think of to prevent the perma smiles from showing, & camera angle was the best way to achieve my misson! ;)
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This is a very captivating story BB and your skills with the camera are great. Your scenes are staged so perfectly.
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This is a very captivating story BB and your skills with the camera are great. Your scenes are staged so perfectly.
Thank you, Gis! I'm glad you are enjoying my efforts! :-[