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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: seawarrior on May 18, 2008, 12:18:03
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Hi :wave:,
I just finished making this story and wanted to share it with all of you, my sister and I made this story together :). I hope you like it! :yup:
Seawarrior and sister
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Some where in Ireland at castle Edinburgh :lol: there was a great feast being prepared. Lords from all over came to celebrate the newly built castle and all of it's money in the treasury.
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All the gaurds were having a great time, they got an all you can drink buffet! :lol:
This did not help matters.
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The maids worked very hard to get the food to the table, there were 5 maids!
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Suddenly a villager rushed in demanding to see the king! His wish was granted, and he ran to the king. He said,"My lord, my lord! I was farming my land, right, and I saw this huge army aprroaching. I looked harder and could see horns!
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Another Lord came to the king and they disscussed what to do, after a few minutes the king commanded all of his peasants to go get weapons from the armory.
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Unwillingly the kings cross bow man outfitted them.
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The King commanded all of his troops to defend the walls and await further orders
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Quickly the guard house gaurds raised the gates, or as quickly as drunkman can raise a drawbridge.
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The viking army was getting nearer and people getting scareder as they took each step.
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I hope you liked the first wave!
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alright, next wave coming up
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The warriors got closer and closer, Soon enough they were only about 100 feet away, ladders ready to scale the wall
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First they attacked the right wall climbing as quickly as they could
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next they attacked the gatehouse
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a full assult was under way
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there was fierce fighting
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evantually the entire wall was under viking control
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it wasnt hard to take the house
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the civiliansrushed out a back door, the gaurds "defending" them as they ran away
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soon they had all ecscaped
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the viking warlord stood in the balcony and demanded the men to search for treasure
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the vikings wreeked havoc!
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they broke down a door and found what they were looking for... treasure
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the survivors spent a cold night at a campfire and were gone before dawn
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thats the second wave, just one more wave to go, anyone know whats gonna happen next? Guess away. ???
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That's a very exciting story, Seawarrior!
Nice photos, too.
I was surprised to see that so many survivors were able to escape from the ferocious attackers ... :o
I would guess that:
1. The survivors run into a friendly hunting party.
or
2. Arrive safely at a friendly castle.
or
3. Are eaten by a dragon ... ;)
All the best,
Richard
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Great story, seawarrior, with lots of action and plenty of tension - you know when to stop so your audience wants more!
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all of those are great ideas, but no. Yes I thought it was to many survivors to but my sister couldn't stand so many civilians being killed. :-[
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thank you playmo fire
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after a few more guesses I'll give you all a hint
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Wow! ... it's a lot of fun :yup:
I hope to get a castle soon. Well, unfortunately, It won't be that soon. ('Have lots of things to get, before I can think about buying a castle ...)
Uhm ... Richard gave most of the imaginative possibilities, mate.
(I truly like the dragon one ;D )
But lets see ... They go into a cave, and find a lost world! 8}
Or ... They go to the local wizard, who tells them to search for a magic ring that makes people invisible, and -- ahm ... hmm :hmm: maybe not: someone already used that!
G.
:)
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ok, third wave coming up! 8}
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A few miles away the survivors found a small forest by the water. They decided the would make a boat, or die trying!
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A few hours before the ships maiden voyage some boys were playing by a tree. Unfortunately thr tree had been started cutting down, but was not all the way. The small boys were crushed! :'(
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There could be no delays, the villagers packed the ship and set sail.They made the ship look like a viking ship so any patroling viking ships would stay away. ;D
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After a few hours of plain sailing the ship came to a few rocks, the rocks blocked the way!
Can't go under 'em, can't go arond 'em, have to go threw 'em!
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That was not the best of ideas, ecspecialy when your helmsman is awful!
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Ah! Were sinking! The villagers didn't do well in water :lol:
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It was utter CHAOS!
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Every Man for himsrlf!
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One of the older farmers got tangled in the wrigging
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Five brave peasants had been lost. :'(
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A clumsy knight slipped and fell back in the water, his heavy armor wieghed him down. :'(
Now there are 8 less survivors :o
2 boys killed by a tree
5 more drowned
and 1 clumsy knight :lol:
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end of third wave, I would have posted the fourth wave now but I accidentaly deleted them off my camera because I thought I had downloaded them :doh:
Have to go do it again, could take a while, will take a while, enjoy
Seawarrior
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Well, that was an all-action episode seawarrior, and now we have to wait until you redo the next one! Anyway, another great wave and the excitement continues. I especially like the chaos picture, btw. Very effective with the blurring.
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to tell the truth I didn't mean to blur the picture, just bad photography skills :-[
I did think it looked kind of cool though as I posted it ;D
thank you,
Seawarrior
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to tell the truth I didn't mean to blur the picture, just bad photography skills :-[
I did think it looked kind of cool though as I posted it ;D
thank you,
Seawarrior
Never tell the truth if the photo looks good!
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Good advice! :lol:
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Great story so far, SW! It looks like you and your sister have been having a lot of fun setting up the scenes and working out the plot. :)
I was pleased that so many villagers managed to escape when the vikings attacked the castle since I prefer happy endings to violent ones, even if they might be slightly less realistic. ;)
But I see the death count is now rising rapidly. I hope there will be some survivors left by the end of the tale. :o
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There has to be at least one, or who would be able to tell the tale?
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Wow! :) The boat chapter was great! I loved the way you told that the trees became the boat! Very creative :yup:
It's too bad the fouth part was lost :-\
G.
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alright finnaly got around to making the 4th wave
its almost done
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Hi :wave:
Finally got the 4th and fifth wave done.
The survivors were now back where they started. They started to walk towards the knigs castle,[a 45 mile walk].
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They came to a place that wordied the king and the lord, it looked like a very good place for ambush.
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And it was behind were roman troops, in front, and the sides
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the villagers were soon rounded up, the king tried to tlk his way out
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the king and the lord were brought before the roman senate
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afer they heard the story they decided to attack the barbarians and sent a messenger for the another kings army
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there was no sign of him and it had been two days, the romans decided to attack any way
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thats the 4th wave its short but the 5th is really long
hope you like it
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ok the start of 5th wave, witch i had to redo aswell :-\
The romans spread out across the plains in front of the castle