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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 06:59:01

Title: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 06:59:01
'This will be an amazing business opportunity,' Tessa explained to Kim.

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'It won't need much work,' she said.

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'Just a bit of tidying up and a bit of paint.'

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'It will be wonderful!'

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 06:59:54
'Look at this ideal schooling paddock,' continued Tessa.

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'Can't you just imagine all the happy riders here?'

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'I'm buying it!' said Tessa.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:00:47
After the renovations were complete, it was an exciting day when the first ponies arrived.

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(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS09_zpseda7a762.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS09_zpseda7a762.jpg.html)

They were shortly followed by two more.

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'We must have a Grand Opening Day,' thought Tessa.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:01:51
A famous rider opened Tessa's Riding School.  Lots of people came.

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They enjoyed the food.

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And the children enjoyed exploring the stables.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS14_zpsdfd30b7f.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS14_zpsdfd30b7f.jpg.html)

But when the food was all gone, so were all the people.

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Except for two children who actually wanted riding lessons!

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:02:55
They were the first pupils.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS17_zps9602e37d.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS17_zps9602e37d.jpg.html)

Though they were soon followed by others.  Tessa took the lessons.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS18_zps35e09c49.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS18_zps35e09c49.jpg.html)

While Kim worked hard in the office, accompanied by her new dog, Pongo.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS19_zps79fa170f.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS19_zps79fa170f.jpg.html)

'We need some horses for adults too,' said Tessa.

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And so Kim (and Pongo) set off for the Horse Sale.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:03:53
Tessa was very excited when Kim returned.

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'A grey!' said Tessa, 'I love greys!'

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'Oh no!' screamed Tessa.

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'He's called Thomas,' said Kim, 'He's lovely.  I couldn't resist him.'

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'But I've already advertised that we will now be giving lessons to adults,' despaired Tessa.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:05:16
'Right,' said Tessa, 'I am going myself to the Horse Sale.'

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS27_zps28f81d74.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS27_zps28f81d74.jpg.html)

'Now these are proper riding school horses,' she said, on her return.  Kim thought that they looked a little dull.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS28_zpsd11882c1.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS28_zpsd11882c1.jpg.html)

'And now we have Midnight too, we are ready for the excitement of adult lessons,' declared Tessa.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS29_zps6526f90c.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS29_zps6526f90c.jpg.html)

Kim thought that adult lessons didn't look very exciting.

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But she had Thomas and Pongo, and she was happy.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:06:28
Tessa had to admit that they needed something a little more lively.

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'Spot is wonderful!' she said.

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'He's very intelligent!'

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'I still love Thomas best,' thought Kim.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:07:51
Unknown to Tessa and Kim, Spot used his intelligence for his own purposes, also.

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It was no trouble for him to open his stable door.

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And to go visiting the other horses.

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And the ponies too.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:09:00
One night Spot let out all the horses and ponies - and Thomas.

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And he led them away.

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He led them to the Great Forest.

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'The horses! The ponies!' cried Tessa.

'THOMAS!' wailed Kim.

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The horses and ponies were never seen again.

But.....
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:09:56
There was one who returned.

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'Thomas!'

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'Oh, Thomas!'

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Raven on March 28, 2014, 07:11:12
'Trying to run a riding school is very difficult,' said Tessa.

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'But this will be an amazing business opportunity,' Tessa explained to Kim.

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS48_zpsdbafbcfd.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS48_zpsdbafbcfd.jpg.html)

'It won't need much work,' she said, 'Just a bit of tidying up and a bit of paint.  It will be wonderful!'

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS49_zps92522577.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS49_zps92522577.jpg.html)

'It can be a residential Dog Training School,' continued Tessa. 'And I can start by training Pongo.  And Thomas can give donkey rides to children!'

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/Raven461/RS50_zpse6584961.jpg) (http://s71.photobucket.com/user/Raven461/media/RS50_zpse6584961.jpg.html)

'Is there a butcher's shop in the Great Forest?' wondered Pongo.

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Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Rhalius on March 28, 2014, 08:40:10
Great story, very entertaining!  :)

I love how Tessa and Kim have differences of opinion, and Thomas is great! I wonder how they will do with their dog school..

Never knew clickies where such free loaders by the way, coming in for the free food and then disappear.  ;)
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: leefert on March 28, 2014, 09:34:49
Neat story! Are you going to continue it? Will the horses come home?????
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: bonniebeth on March 28, 2014, 11:27:40
Very nice story! I really love the custom kennels at the end!
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: sunflower on March 28, 2014, 13:33:35
Great story! Really great to read and admire your lovely and humorous settings.

The hat looks great on Tessa!
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Birdie on March 28, 2014, 14:04:12
Wonderful  :love: Your stories are so much fun to read - with quite unexpected turns too.

Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: Tiermann on March 28, 2014, 19:00:29
Great story with interesting twists. Thanks for posting it!
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: DrDalek6 on March 29, 2014, 11:41:38
Really liked that story as others have said some good surprises in it and the difference of opinion between Tessa and KIm I really liked the photo of the kids learning to ride the ponies and Tessa being dragged along by SPot  ;D
Title: Re: Tessa's Riding School
Post by: playmovictorian on March 29, 2014, 14:27:32
Excellent little story with a twist  :love:

I love the pictures which have really beautifully captured the attitude of the horses !

Karim