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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: Lynx on October 02, 2013, 14:27:40

Title: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 02, 2013, 14:27:40

Here they are: the first pages of part five: THE FAR SOUTH
If you want to read part 4 first, you can click on the link here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=12176.0)
Are you new to this comic? Click on the links for part 1, part 2 and part 3 down in my signature

GET READY FOR SOME ACTION!

Enjoy!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 02, 2013, 14:29:41

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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 02, 2013, 14:31:28

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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Rhalius on October 02, 2013, 15:36:02

trouble seems to find them where ever they go, how will they get out of this?  ???

Great set up for the pictures!  :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: playmovictorian on October 02, 2013, 18:45:31

You are a great story teller and the lighting of your scènes is wonderful  :love: :love:

Karim

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Tiermann on October 02, 2013, 18:47:02

Great continuation! Really liking the use of the circular movement stripes, adds great additional depth to the action

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on October 03, 2013, 14:41:37

To be continued?! In a such a cliffhanger!? AGH. I want more now. Uhm. Pretty please?

Great pics, as always. I think it's amazing how you can really get them to move! :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Birdie on October 06, 2013, 11:56:04

Hi Lynx! I finally got around to reading the entire story so far.

 :wow:  :wow: Congratulations on this awesome comic!  :wow: :wow:

You've managed to create a lot of tension right from the start and I'm still very curious to find out what really happened with Randolph in the beginning. Everywhere all these great-looking characters keep popping up, I love it  ;D
You've used the 'special' facial expressions really well I think: the slightly confused and somewhat silly expression of Randolph always works, and then there's Lizzy's face... Briljant use of that alien! I never used to like those weird looking demon clickies, shows how much I know  :)

I've had a lot of laughs while reading and you make it funny in a subtle way sometimes too. That white lord is hilarious, and you yet can almost feel for him too in a way, because he has this history of being made fun of. The others aren't black-and-white either. I really like that in a comic.

The photography is very good too. Do you make storyboards or something before you start shooting?
And I like the little effects of movement and noise. They seem just right!

The only sad thing is that I now have to wait for the rest, like everyone else   ;)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Georgeag1972 on October 06, 2013, 16:39:32

I love this part of your story. :love: You have done some very nice pictures here with great scenes!!! Congrats!!

George. :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 08, 2013, 10:13:41

Thanks for your nice comments, my friends.. As I told you before, that really means a lot to me!

@Rhalius: Randolph didn't end up there by accident... you'll see!
@Playmovictorian: I only take pics at daylight, this scene turned out pretty well (not because of my skills as photographer which are pretty limited ;)
@Tiermann: I did those circular movements before (p.e. in part 2) but with bigger pics the depth effect is much better.. I didn't notice that.. Thanks!
@tahra: Yes, that is mean isn't it? I do that because I want my beloved readers keep attached...(is this correct English?)
Don't worry, I've been busy with the next pages a lot last week...
@Birdie: A new reader! I'm glad to have you on board Birdie, especially because of your nice comment (as always). Randolph's expression works out well indeed, I wasn't aware of that when I started the comic but coincidentally it turns out exactly the way you describe it. The face of Lizzy is something different, when I change the camera angle (en profile, from below it looks like he is smiling and en face he's more serious) The blue eyed ghost pirates have the most expression in my opinion. I don't make storyboards, they're all in my head... ::) Only for dialogues or to sort out pictures I sometimes use pen and paper. I do it all on intuition, after reading tons of comics in my life (lots of them from Belgium!) I just know how it should look like.
@Georgeag1972: Thanks, there's more coming up!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 21, 2013, 20:15:25

four new pages!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: grangel on October 21, 2013, 21:46:20

Very good job my friend!!!! ;D :lol:

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Tiermann on October 22, 2013, 00:43:45

Go Betty Go!!!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Georgeag1972 on October 22, 2013, 10:32:36

Excellent job as always!!! :love:

George. :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Birdie on October 22, 2013, 17:33:04

Haha, excellent  ;D

*don't mess with skeleton dino's*

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on October 23, 2013, 08:48:59

That was great.. but.. ANOTHER cliffhanger, Lynx!? You wanna kill your audience?   :P

And I agree with Tiermann.. GO BETTY!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 26, 2013, 20:35:14

..you're right, from now on no cliffhangers anymore...   

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Tiermann on October 26, 2013, 22:28:24

Uh oh. Not too worried though, it's pretty hard to kill the undead.

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on October 27, 2013, 19:11:29

:o

But... unless they scraped the bone.. she should be fine, right?

I admit it might be complicated to untangle the spear, but hopefully that's all there is to it. Right? RIGHT?

Quote from: Lynx on October 26, 2013, 20:35:14

..you're right, from now on no cliffhangers anymore...   

 :wall:

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Rhalius on October 28, 2013, 14:03:50

Poor Betty, good thing she's already dead though?  ???

Great pictures again, I like how she sends that one fellow flying off his horse with a wack of her tail.

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on October 29, 2013, 20:16:28

 ;) R4P16

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on November 21, 2013, 15:44:52

Four fresh pages, enjoy!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on November 21, 2013, 21:17:27

:)

So, she's really ok, right?

(another great part - MORE! .. please?)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on November 22, 2013, 18:52:23

don't worry, tahra.. I love her as much as you do! ;)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Georgeag1972 on November 23, 2013, 18:53:47

One more wonderful part. I like your story and your pictures very much!!
You are doing excellent job here Lynx, congrats!

George. :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Tiermann on November 23, 2013, 21:01:40

Wonderful continuation! I really like the look of the lion figure, well done custom there.

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: grangel on November 24, 2013, 21:59:01

I have surely enjoyed it !!THANK YOU!! ;D

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on January 09, 2014, 21:25:10

New pages! :P

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: sunflower on January 10, 2014, 08:02:15

 :love: I just started reading the whole Randolph story! It is great. I love the way you make the little guys come to life with their own personalities.
That look on the face while the other one burps is super!

You have a new fan.

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Rhalius on January 10, 2014, 10:27:51

Heh, well that lion king sure is hungry, must be from building his beautifull castle.  :)

Great way to continue the story, the plot thickens once more. Now I'm curious about these newly mentioned cats though...

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Tiermann on January 11, 2014, 02:13:49

Great continuation, thanks!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on January 12, 2014, 20:42:43

:love:

Great to see Betty's ok  :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Birdie on January 12, 2014, 21:25:06

"That sneaky fur ball"  ;D

I like how the little dashes and lines make the characters come alive when they talk.

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Georgeag1972 on January 13, 2014, 09:23:40

Very nice continuation, well done Lynx!!

George. :)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on January 27, 2014, 21:00:16

The last pages of part five. Enjoy! Please, leave a comment!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on January 27, 2014, 21:01:31

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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: tahra on January 27, 2014, 21:06:29

:lmao: skinny cows and goats... :lmao:  horsies in their jammies :lmao:

More! More! More! More! More! More! More!  Pretty please?  :love:

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Birdie on January 28, 2014, 07:32:48

Briljant, Lynx  :)  So funny and well thought out.

I really like the backdrops you use, by the way.

You'll have an eager audience for part 6  :munch:

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on January 31, 2014, 13:41:59

Thanks a lot, tahra and Birdie! Actually, I was hoping for more views than only two but it makes you two extra special as exclusive readers! :P

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: playmovictorian on February 02, 2014, 15:26:37

This is a really great story and your characters are so colourful  :love:

You should definitely make a little movie and share it on Youtube as I am sure that it would be really popular !

Thanks for sharing your amazing imagination, sense of humour & talent with us  :)

Karim

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on March 10, 2014, 20:28:36

Thanks Karim! Letting you know I'm still on track I present you the cover of part six:

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Rhalius on March 12, 2014, 09:11:02

 :o Is that a cyclops dressed in black?

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on March 12, 2014, 11:50:27

...introducing the black panther; to quote the lion: 'that sneaky fur ball'  ;)

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: Lynx on March 20, 2014, 21:58:28

The saga continues, click here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=13789.0) for part 6!

Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 5: THE FAR SOUTH
Post by: conniefrere on June 17, 2014, 21:19:55

Just read story al over again, been away for some time, but looking at this again you see your skills in details, photography and layout increase...

Story line evolves well, and the humor stays as good as ever..."thw birds or the bones"  :lol:

Up to story 6. Oh yeah dont want to be the spoiler, but starting to get the feeling that the tiger from the beginning combined with the rec general are Randalph  :o, why would he also be called a catman.

Btw Are you a catlover?