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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: bonniebeth on July 10, 2012, 22:04:29

Title: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: bonniebeth on July 10, 2012, 22:04:29

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Tommy suddenly sits straight up in bed. Looking out of his window, he sees flashing blue lights approaching the house and as they stop in front, he becomes aware of the searing heat and the smell of smoke.

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Leaping out of bed, he hears Buddy barking furiously outside his door.

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Remembering the fire safety class he recently had at school, he runs and feels the door and doorknob to see if they are hot. On finding them cool to the touch he opens the door.

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Through the thick smoke, he can barely make out his dad lying at the top of the stairs. “Help me, Buddy!”

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Together, Buddy and nine-year-old Tommy drag Mr. Leonard into the bedroom.

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After shutting the door behind them, Tommy stuffs a blanket under the door to keep out as much smoke as possible.

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He then stands on the bed and shows himself in the window, without opening it, of course.

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He is relieved to see two firemen pointing up at him, and then signaling him to stay put.

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Meanwhile, the sound of the sirens has also awaked Mary.

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She wakes up Robert and the two of them head for the stairs.

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But they see heavy smoke filling the stairwell, and flickering flames at the bottom. They know they can never make it.

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So they head for the front balcony and wait there to be rescued.

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As Mary looks down and sees only Amy and Sophie have made it outside, she begins sobbing. Robert puts his arms around her and tries to reassure her everything will be alright, though he is not so convinced himself.



To be continued....

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: basilsdad on July 10, 2012, 22:08:35

More, more, more . . . the suspense is killing me!
Joe

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: Tiermann on July 11, 2012, 00:12:21

We have to wait until Thursday! (or maybe even later)
Who knew Bonnie had such a cruel streak  :P

The blue lights are perfect, very well done

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: bonniebeth on July 11, 2012, 01:05:30

Good news on that. ;D Chris came home earlier than expected today, so we were able to shoot part 3. I'll get it posted either tonight or tomorrow!

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: basilsdad on July 11, 2012, 01:15:46

Yea!

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: Bill Blackhurst on July 11, 2012, 01:46:26

Excellent! Can't wait!

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: Georgeag1972 on July 11, 2012, 09:05:14

Great work again. :)9 :)9 :)9
I love your story, well done. :)9 :)9
I will go now to the part 3 to see the pictures and the continuing of your story. <:>

George. :)

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: Wolf Knight on July 11, 2012, 09:22:52

Clever thinking, Tommy!!! Way to go!!!!

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: Rhalius on July 11, 2012, 09:45:10

Great pictures, wonderfull poses when Tommy and drags his father into the bedroom with the help of buddy, and that the grandparents are walking slightly bend.
Also quite creative ways to hide their smiles from view to add to the emotion.  :)

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: bonniebeth on July 11, 2012, 12:04:39

Thanks everybody! :) And rhalius, yes I worked hard at hiding those smiles! :lol:

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: tonguello on July 11, 2012, 14:51:03

It's fun AND educational!!!! great stuff bb!

Good work hiding the smiles, and nice touch btw!  :)9

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: PlaymoMan on July 21, 2012, 23:38:41

I'm looking forward to reading part three!

Title: Re: Fire at the Mansion -- Part 2
Post by: lee gray on July 22, 2012, 08:17:26

Gripping stuff, Tommy has learnt well.