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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: Lynx on July 27, 2012, 21:33:22

Title: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on July 27, 2012, 21:33:22
Hi, I proudly present the first pages of The Story of Randolph Part 3: Demons

If you want to read Part 2 first, you can click here]http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=11286.0/]here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=11286.0/)

If you want to read Part 1 first, you can click here]http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=9817.0/]here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=9817.0/)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on July 27, 2012, 21:45:43
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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on July 27, 2012, 21:51:02
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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on July 27, 2012, 22:12:58
Good to see another part 8-) 8-) Keep them coming my friend...
Actually, I think I'm gonna read the whole story from the beginning.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Rhalius on July 28, 2012, 10:39:31
Wonderfull pictures, you really managed to capture the large battle very well, and I love how he's waving that fish around.  ;)

I feel sorry for the many clickies which died though.  :(
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Wolf Knight on July 29, 2012, 08:45:35
This is gettting awesomer and awesomer!!! More more!!! Please more!!!  ;D ;D
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Georgeag1972 on July 29, 2012, 10:22:02
Your pictures are amazing and the battle with very nice scenes. :)9 :)9
Great story too. :clap: :clap:
Many thanks for sharing.

Greetings George. :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on July 29, 2012, 14:08:52
Thanks guys, although it's a time- eating hobby, I have lot of fun making it. Glad to hear you like it!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tonguello on July 30, 2012, 15:56:45
great! I had missed this episode before!  ;D

I really like where this is going and can'¡t wait to see it!

just one thing.... and I don't mean to critizes, but could it be possible to make the comic's pages a little bigger? It would be easier to read and we could enjoy better the details in the pics  :) :) :)

Well done!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on August 01, 2012, 10:48:15
great! I had missed this episode before!  ;D

I really like where this is going and can'¡t wait to see it!

just one thing.... and I don't mean to critizes, but could it be possible to make the comic's pages a little bigger? It would be easier to read and we could enjoy better the details in the pics  :) :) :)

Well done!

I agree and have to figure out how. I've chosen for this format of four pics each page to increase the readability and the pics are easy to download. In part one, first pages I've tried to stretch the pics out but the result was the personages were looking weird- too tall, too fat etc.
I could try to post them per two, but the result is you have double the amount of pages to open to read the same story. If you have suggestions, I'd love to hear, tonguello! I'm always open for feedback, if it makes the comic better!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Olki on August 01, 2012, 11:50:07
Extraordinary! I like your story very much, cool characters, superb customs and the comic-style makes it easy to understand...
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: grangel on August 04, 2012, 13:36:48
Magnificent!!!
You made a mastepiece!!!

Please more my friend!!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Tiermann on August 04, 2012, 14:30:46
Great continuation of the story, looking forward to Lizzies story
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on September 24, 2012, 17:50:48
:) Awesome!

Is there a part 4 (hopeful)?

You really have a knack for setting up the scenes and taking the pics to make it so.... comic like!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on September 25, 2012, 08:29:13
Thanks to all of you for your comments! Just back from holiday but loads of pics are ready for photshop, hope to post new pages this week or next week. Tahra, part three is not finished yet and yes, there will come a part four... actually, I have storyline till part 12! Olki, thanks too, glad to have a new reader!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on September 27, 2012, 16:01:48
Hi there! Four new pages and I'm working on the next ones. Enjoy!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on September 27, 2012, 16:15:43
Great again. From the front cover of part three we know what to expect....poor Randolph.


Btw, to which text balloon refers the asterisk which says read part two? Does it belong to the guardian of the forest mentioning betty belong to the bad guys?
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Georgeag1972 on September 27, 2012, 16:20:08
Many thanks for the new pages Lynx. Great story, well done.
I like very much your pictures and of course your customs. :love: Excellent work.

Friendly George. :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on September 27, 2012, 16:21:31
Great one again! (even if I'm allergic to angels ever since Xena  >:( )

Love you managed to convey movement to Mr Green's little friends with just a few wee lines :o

Btw, to which text balloon refers the asterisk which says read part two? Does it belong to the guardian of the forest mentioning betty belong to the bad guys?

No, it's on that same panel - Lizzie says "... WHEN THE FIGHTING STARTS *"

Now I want more!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on September 27, 2012, 16:24:41
Oh yeah,thanks Tara.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Rhalius on September 27, 2012, 23:30:39
great to see the story continue once more.  :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: grangel on October 01, 2012, 21:31:39
Great Work!
Please,please,please keep on!!!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Wolf Knight on October 02, 2012, 05:39:35
Seems our heroes are in for a big fight!!! Can't wait!!!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on October 02, 2012, 14:57:25
Ok, get ready for some action!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on October 02, 2012, 15:15:07
Again, awesome how you can make them MOVE!

(loved the guy on the tree, and the scene about the arm :) )
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on October 02, 2012, 20:19:46
 :lol: :lol: :lol:

Great again.... what can I say more it's brilliant....
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Rhalius on October 03, 2012, 12:15:31
great pictures, it really reads like a cartoon.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Georgeag1972 on October 03, 2012, 17:38:16
Great pictures indeed. And I like very much your customs Lynx. Great story too. Well dome my friend.
Many thanks for sharing.

George. :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on October 25, 2012, 16:23:05
Here it is, a brand new, action- packed episode!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: grangel on October 25, 2012, 22:45:27
My god i'm goint to explode as i'm waiting for the next part of story!!!

Come on Randolph use your handgun to kill this overconfident banch of bones!!

Great work!!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on October 27, 2012, 07:13:31
Marvellous again! I love the special effects.... :love:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Georgeag1972 on October 27, 2012, 08:42:51
Amazing story with fantastc pictures and very nice effects, well done.

George.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on October 27, 2012, 18:52:39
:)

I want more!

Again, perfect creating the movement! How do you do that!?
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: PlaymoZoo on October 27, 2012, 20:00:49
AWESOME story!!
Really, really great! Just read it. The red general is actually pretty creepy..!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on October 28, 2012, 12:31:22
:)

I want more!

Again, perfect creating the movement! How do you do that!?
I made 3 pictures of the same scenery and only moved Razor. The first pic I used as background, the others as a layer.
Then I made the layers transparant and added the wee lines and cirkels to suggest the direction of the movement.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on October 28, 2012, 12:33:00
AWESOME story!!
Really, really great! Just read it. The red general is actually pretty creepy..!

Yes! A new reader! I'm glad you liked it, Playmozoo. Did you read part one and two as well?
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tonguello on October 29, 2012, 16:20:45
Awesome!
 :love:
I love the comic effects  :lol:
I can't imagine the ammount of time/work in these, Is that so?
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on October 29, 2012, 16:29:34
Awesome!
 :love:
I love the comic effects  :lol:
I can't imagine the ammount of time/work in these, Is that so?

Yes! 8} especially the first one, when I tried to get a good result just by trial and error....  when I discovered the best way to get those effects the others were more easy.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: PlaymoZoo on October 30, 2012, 14:32:13
Yes! A new reader! I'm glad you liked it, Playmozoo. Did you read part one and two as well?

Just did! It is GREAT!! I love Betty :love:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on October 30, 2012, 14:43:31
Just did! It is GREAT!! I love Betty :love:

I think she could have her own fanclub! :love:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Wolf Knight on October 30, 2012, 18:41:29
Lynx, these two last parts are really well done!! I love all the action series you did on Razor!!! Very well executed indeed!! Keep them coming!!!  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on November 09, 2012, 15:31:46
Here we go... ;D
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on November 09, 2012, 15:33:46
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Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tahra on November 09, 2012, 19:27:49
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - the end, already?!

I want more! These are great Lynx! Can't wait to meet your namesake :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: el jefe on November 10, 2012, 02:13:06
Love this series!  I really enjoy playmo stories in comic style and you do it so well!  :wave:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Wolf Knight on November 10, 2012, 07:18:03
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
An undead army chewed to the...bone  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Very clever, Lynx!!! Very clever indeed!!!   :)9 :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: tonguello on November 10, 2012, 11:21:51
 :love: I love this comic! and I loved Fluffy.  :lol: :lol: :lol:
I got myself a Betty last night in honor of this thread  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: PlaymoMan on November 10, 2012, 15:06:25
Wow, what a great ending to part three! Thanks for sharing this comic, it's great! :wow:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Georgeag1972 on November 10, 2012, 17:45:15
Wondeful new series. I like this comic too. Very mice job.
Many thanks for sharing.

George.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: grangel on November 11, 2012, 19:42:34
Goooo! Nature Go!
Magnificent outcome of this part!!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Tiermann on November 13, 2012, 00:23:25
Excellent, great story telling! Thanks for continuing it
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Rhalius on November 14, 2012, 00:40:41
Great story!
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: WarriorOfToys on November 14, 2012, 19:41:51
So excited to hear more! :)
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on November 23, 2012, 20:25:22
 ;D Thanks my friends! I'm working on part four right now, this will be the cover:
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: conniefrere on November 24, 2012, 08:07:23
Great picture! I was wondering when your avatar would show up in the story.
Title: Re: *new* THE STORY OF RANDOLPH PART 3: DEMONS
Post by: Lynx on August 21, 2013, 10:52:14
Thanks! Want more? For part four "The Way of the Cat" you can click here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=12176.0)