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Creative => Story-Telling => Topic started by: Lynx on July 27, 2012, 21:33:22
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Hi, I proudly present the first pages of The Story of Randolph Part 3: Demons
If you want to read Part 2 first, you can click here]http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=11286.0/]here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=11286.0/)
If you want to read Part 1 first, you can click here]http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=9817.0/]here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=9817.0/)
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Good to see another part 8-) 8-) Keep them coming my friend...
Actually, I think I'm gonna read the whole story from the beginning.
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Wonderfull pictures, you really managed to capture the large battle very well, and I love how he's waving that fish around. ;)
I feel sorry for the many clickies which died though. :(
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This is gettting awesomer and awesomer!!! More more!!! Please more!!! ;D ;D
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Your pictures are amazing and the battle with very nice scenes. :)9 :)9
Great story too. :clap: :clap:
Many thanks for sharing.
Greetings George. :)
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Thanks guys, although it's a time- eating hobby, I have lot of fun making it. Glad to hear you like it!
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great! I had missed this episode before! ;D
I really like where this is going and can'¡t wait to see it!
just one thing.... and I don't mean to critizes, but could it be possible to make the comic's pages a little bigger? It would be easier to read and we could enjoy better the details in the pics :) :) :)
Well done!
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great! I had missed this episode before! ;D
I really like where this is going and can'¡t wait to see it!
just one thing.... and I don't mean to critizes, but could it be possible to make the comic's pages a little bigger? It would be easier to read and we could enjoy better the details in the pics :) :) :)
Well done!
I agree and have to figure out how. I've chosen for this format of four pics each page to increase the readability and the pics are easy to download. In part one, first pages I've tried to stretch the pics out but the result was the personages were looking weird- too tall, too fat etc.
I could try to post them per two, but the result is you have double the amount of pages to open to read the same story. If you have suggestions, I'd love to hear, tonguello! I'm always open for feedback, if it makes the comic better!
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Extraordinary! I like your story very much, cool characters, superb customs and the comic-style makes it easy to understand...
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Magnificent!!!
You made a mastepiece!!!
Please more my friend!!
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Great continuation of the story, looking forward to Lizzies story
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:) Awesome!
Is there a part 4 (hopeful)?
You really have a knack for setting up the scenes and taking the pics to make it so.... comic like!
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Thanks to all of you for your comments! Just back from holiday but loads of pics are ready for photshop, hope to post new pages this week or next week. Tahra, part three is not finished yet and yes, there will come a part four... actually, I have storyline till part 12! Olki, thanks too, glad to have a new reader!
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Hi there! Four new pages and I'm working on the next ones. Enjoy!
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Great again. From the front cover of part three we know what to expect....poor Randolph.
Btw, to which text balloon refers the asterisk which says read part two? Does it belong to the guardian of the forest mentioning betty belong to the bad guys?
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Many thanks for the new pages Lynx. Great story, well done.
I like very much your pictures and of course your customs. :love: Excellent work.
Friendly George. :)
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Great one again! (even if I'm allergic to angels ever since Xena >:( )
Love you managed to convey movement to Mr Green's little friends with just a few wee lines :o
Btw, to which text balloon refers the asterisk which says read part two? Does it belong to the guardian of the forest mentioning betty belong to the bad guys?
No, it's on that same panel - Lizzie says "... WHEN THE FIGHTING STARTS *"
Now I want more!
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Oh yeah,thanks Tara.
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great to see the story continue once more. :)
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Great Work!
Please,please,please keep on!!!
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Seems our heroes are in for a big fight!!! Can't wait!!!
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Ok, get ready for some action!
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Again, awesome how you can make them MOVE!
(loved the guy on the tree, and the scene about the arm :) )
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:lol: :lol: :lol:
Great again.... what can I say more it's brilliant....
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great pictures, it really reads like a cartoon.
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Great pictures indeed. And I like very much your customs Lynx. Great story too. Well dome my friend.
Many thanks for sharing.
George. :)
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Here it is, a brand new, action- packed episode!
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My god i'm goint to explode as i'm waiting for the next part of story!!!
Come on Randolph use your handgun to kill this overconfident banch of bones!!
Great work!!
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Marvellous again! I love the special effects.... :love:
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Amazing story with fantastc pictures and very nice effects, well done.
George.
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I want more!
Again, perfect creating the movement! How do you do that!?
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AWESOME story!!
Really, really great! Just read it. The red general is actually pretty creepy..!
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I want more!
Again, perfect creating the movement! How do you do that!?
I made 3 pictures of the same scenery and only moved Razor. The first pic I used as background, the others as a layer.
Then I made the layers transparant and added the wee lines and cirkels to suggest the direction of the movement.
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AWESOME story!!
Really, really great! Just read it. The red general is actually pretty creepy..!
Yes! A new reader! I'm glad you liked it, Playmozoo. Did you read part one and two as well?
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Awesome!
:love:
I love the comic effects :lol:
I can't imagine the ammount of time/work in these, Is that so?
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Awesome!
:love:
I love the comic effects :lol:
I can't imagine the ammount of time/work in these, Is that so?
Yes! 8} especially the first one, when I tried to get a good result just by trial and error.... when I discovered the best way to get those effects the others were more easy.
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Yes! A new reader! I'm glad you liked it, Playmozoo. Did you read part one and two as well?
Just did! It is GREAT!! I love Betty :love:
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Just did! It is GREAT!! I love Betty :love:
I think she could have her own fanclub! :love:
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Lynx, these two last parts are really well done!! I love all the action series you did on Razor!!! Very well executed indeed!! Keep them coming!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Here we go... ;D
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - the end, already?!
I want more! These are great Lynx! Can't wait to meet your namesake :)
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Love this series! I really enjoy playmo stories in comic style and you do it so well! :wave:
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
An undead army chewed to the...bone :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Very clever, Lynx!!! Very clever indeed!!! :)9 :clap: :clap: :clap:
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:love: I love this comic! and I loved Fluffy. :lol: :lol: :lol:
I got myself a Betty last night in honor of this thread ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Wow, what a great ending to part three! Thanks for sharing this comic, it's great! :wow:
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Wondeful new series. I like this comic too. Very mice job.
Many thanks for sharing.
George.
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Goooo! Nature Go!
Magnificent outcome of this part!!
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Excellent, great story telling! Thanks for continuing it
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Great story!
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So excited to hear more! :)
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;D Thanks my friends! I'm working on part four right now, this will be the cover:
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Great picture! I was wondering when your avatar would show up in the story.
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Thanks! Want more? For part four "The Way of the Cat" you can click here (http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=12176.0)