And pray, tell us, should one of you Great Nobles should contravene your own laws, ¿what punishments might ensue?I ask, because I, for one, kill messengers. Slowly.
Sorry to stick my oar in here, but I have a quick suggestion. It might make it easier if you always used italics when speaking in character, and normal print when out of character. That way it might be easier to keep it straight.