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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #20 on: July 29, 2010, 14:34:26 »
Great story, Baden, a real nail biter!  I liked how you showed the smoke coming out the windows, very creative! ;D
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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #21 on: July 29, 2010, 14:44:15 »
Thank you very much Panos, Damo, Giorginetto, and  basilsdad!

I'm very glad you all liked it.

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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #22 on: July 29, 2010, 17:27:01 »
Great story and pcitures, Baden, and thanks for taking me along.

The fire strikes me as possibly suspicious with smoke from so many different areas of the building when the brigade arrived.  Alternatively, the children had been fooling about with matches or candles.  (I have concerns whether the two children were old enough to have been left alone without supervision.  In the UK, children unde 14 can't be left alone with supervision by someone older.)

But the dog?  What happened to the dog?    ???
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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #23 on: July 29, 2010, 17:51:15 »
This is excellent Baden  :wave:

And I love your idea of including Sylvia's and Gordon's avatar to your story  :love:

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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #24 on: July 29, 2010, 21:03:55 »
Great story and pcitures, Baden, and thanks for taking me along.

The fire strikes me as possibly suspicious with smoke from so many different areas of the building when the brigade arrived.  Alternatively, the children had been fooling about with matches or candles.  (I have concerns whether the two children were old enough to have been left alone without supervision.  In the UK, children unde 14 can't be left alone with supervision by someone older.)

But the dog?  What happened to the dog?    ???

I think the blue upturned flowerput next to the front door is a clue! I smell a rat!

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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #25 on: July 30, 2010, 02:06:27 »
Great story and pcitures, Baden, and thanks for taking me along.

The fire strikes me as possibly suspicious with smoke from so many different areas of the building when the brigade arrived.  Alternatively, the children had been fooling about with matches or candles.  (I have concerns whether the two children were old enough to have been left alone without supervision.  In the UK, children unde 14 can't be left alone with supervision by someone older.)

But the dog?  What happened to the dog?    ???

Thank you Gordon very much. I'm glad you liked it.

The girl is soppose to be 13, so shes so of old enough to be left at home alone with here sister. But like you said she was playing with fire. How?.....Well she was trying to cook something,(the kitchen is on the first floor). So from there she had done a mistake and there had caught on fire from the bottom to the top. The dog was also rescued its just that I didn't show it.

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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #26 on: July 30, 2010, 02:08:02 »
I think the blue upturned flowerput next to the front door is a clue! I smell a rat!

Great story baden!

Thank you Ali

No sorry Ali that's really nothing. I just put that way to show it had fallen.

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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #27 on: July 30, 2010, 02:10:00 »
This is excellent Baden  :wave:

And I love your idea of including Sylvia's and Gordon's avatar to your story  :love:

Karim :)

Thank you Karim!


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« Reply #28 on: July 30, 2010, 19:42:30 »
Thank you Ali

No sorry Ali that's really nothing. I just put that way to show it had fallen.

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Was I being too paranoid again? That is a job related illnes, I'm afraid.
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Re: House on Fire!
« Reply #29 on: July 30, 2010, 20:39:25 »
Thank you Gordon very much. I'm glad you liked it.

The girl is soppose to be 13, so shes so of old enough to be left at home alone with here sister. But like you said she was playing with fire. How?.....Well she was trying to cook something,(the kitchen is on the first floor). So from there she had done a mistake and there had caught on fire from the bottom to the top. The dog was also rescued its just that I didn't show it.

Baden  :wave:

I hope she sticks to making salads in future!  :lol:  Good to read he dog's OK, too.

Hope we'll see more adventures of your fire department, Baden. 
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